Senin, 19 April 2010

The Boy with the Golden Eye,

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Chapter 4 The First attack

Everyone amazed and scared what have I did all my wound is healing up very quickly . my hair color starting to change to black from orange. And my eye changing color to red from blue. And all my is on fire but I don’t feel anything. And on my both arm the fire is starting to take shape like sword and my back is starting to become really pain is like something coming=out from my body and it ripping my shirt. i throw my jacket and my stuff. Then something appears from my beck a 1 big huge devil wing. Everyone starting to scream Merry fainted, and the asskicker said “bring it on”. picked up my sword and swung it towards him. And suddenly everything became black

Everything moves so fast. After I wake up, I realized that I was on the hospital. And my handwas cuffed and in the room there are my father, a police man, a detective and merry.

“dad, what happen?”
“I don’t know you tell Me?”
“yes tell us what happen when the school burned down?”
“the school burned down?!”
“no, only the 5th floor””
“its someone hurt?”
“yes, 10 boys burned from top to ground”
“oh my god, who are they?”
“the asskicker and his slave”
“oh, why my hand cuffed?”
“because you may be the starter of the fire”
“no way”
“yes way maybe because you mad to them so you burn them, isn’t that right?”
“noidon’t “
“yes you do!!!”
“no I ughh my head”
“what?”
“my head is hurt somuch auuu”
*fainted*
“hey boy!! Hey!!”
“tell the nurse to check him up hurry !!!”
“sorry sir to make your son hurtsobad”
“don’t worry detactive iknowthis will become true”
“whatdo you mean ypu know this is going to happen?”
“detactive couldyou keep a secret?”
“sure but why?”
“becausei’m going to tell you something very secret that no one must know”

The Boy with the Golden Eye,

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Chapter 3 The beat up

“waw, what a beautiful sunset”
“Yes, the beautiful golden sky will end everyone people life with smile and happiness” David
“Your word is so beautiful dav”
“well is nothing” *Blushed* David
“do you want to go hame together ?”
“sure” David
“dave mr.asskicker want to meet you on the roof”
“but i..” David
“noo but”
“okay, I think you must go home alone marry” David
“okay and be safe”
“I will see you tomorrow” David

“okay what is this all about?”
“What is this about?!” David
“I tell you what is this about!!!”
*punch, kick ,throw, punch with baseball bat, and more*(5 people)
“ugh” David
“I don’t like to see you again with marry UNDERSTAND??!!!”
“No sir” David
“than”
“everyone kill him”
*punch, kick ,throw, punch with baseball bat, and more*(5 people)
“ugh” David
“what are you doing you are hurting him!!”
“stop it right now or I call the teacher”
“maaarrr leav” David
“you think you could stop me everyone get him!!”
“no please, oh please not my skirt not my underwear please someone help me!!!”
“I must help her…” David
“oh no your are not going anywhere we have some business to do”
“please stop this” David
“never until you say yes”
“never” David
“Than I Should kll you”
*hard super extreme punch*(david)
“ahhhhh”
“You break my nose, kill him!!!”

I feel my body become very hot. My hands feel like starting to burn. My back is starting to hurt. And my eye became hurt. What is going on with me. I cannot feel my hand my body start collapse.

“Uahhhhh, it hurt my body hurt!!!” David
“uhh plese no you are hurting me “
“I must help heerrr” David
“Everyone kill that sonof the devil !!”

from hand to bicep started to appear fire. Then my back is growing a devil wing. And my blue sea eye starting to color red. Making his slave afraid. And the desire to kill mr. asskicker and help Mary appears. Everyone is starting to afraid of me because look like the son of a devil

The Boy with the Golden Eye

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Chapter 2 Beautiful event

At last the first thing in my life Merry iscoming to my house.

“What should I prepare? A red candle, a chocolate, or what food that she like? uh..uh..uh..”

The time has come. The time where the Merry come to my house. I already prepare red candle her favorite food and her favorite music. Axe perform check! My favorite lucky underwear check and new suit check!. This is going to be very perfect!!! I hope my dad isn’t here it will gonne be worst. He will show her my baby picture. I cannot let him ruin my perfect event.

*the bell ring*

“it’s here!!, Hello gi…”
“hello son look who I met on the street?”
“Hi!”
“Dad why are you here my perfect event ruin noooo!!!!” David Heart
“so, Merry do you want see Davidbaby picture?”
“sure”
“ do you also want to see Davidchildhood picture he was so cute….”
“Why god? Why my perfect event is ruin!!!”

At 7 o’clock Merry went home and I take her home
In the road

“sorry my dad…”
“no your dad is cool and he also nice”
“your baby picture is so cute your hair…”
“no, please don’t talk about it”
“thank you for inviting me to your house!”
“Your pleasure”

“Hey it’s that David? The one who walking with Merry”
“Damn I want to punch him if he walking with her”
“You will punch him tomorrow”

“Okay this is my road”
“Okay, good bye! By the way you can come to my house any time”
“Thank you”
*KISS*
*Blushed*
*David Run to his house 100 km/h*
‘MERRY KISS ME no one must know!!! Or someone isgoing tokill me”

“DAMN that dav I want to punch his head and kick his ass right now !!
“boss, calm down you will kick him tomorrow”
“no, I want now”

This is the first time I have been kiss by a girl. It feels great really great. My heart is pumping really hard. My face is turning red when I talk about it. It like a dream comes true. Now my heart is full all Love and happiness .but suddenly I breathing difficulty and suddenly I feel chill round me and my hand start to shaking. What is going to happen to me? Why every good event must have a bad event?

Sabtu, 17 April 2010

The Boy with the Golden Eye

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Chapter 1 Introduction

My life is misery. Because my eye color is blue and gold. No one to want to be friends with me. I don’t have a friends I only have a laptop, parent, house, and car. But I have no friends what fun living with no people to talk, to play, to be friend. Everyone scared because my eye.

“this is the life of a freak, isn’t it god?”

No light directing my life. only my book, my dad, my laptop is directing my life. I have a great life everything of my life is perfect but I said id not perfect. Because I don’t have a friend. Maybe I’m the only one person who never have a friends in the world. In my birthday party, I always want a friends coming to my house but no one coming. I wait and wait patiently but no one come. I open the door only the wind and dust coming to my house. And I’m starting crying. Starting to ask

“Why do I born to this world?”
“What is my purpose in this world?”
“Am I your little puppet God?”

But Every Thing Change since That Merry came. That new Merry transfer student is so pretty. Her beutive brown long hair and his blue eye like a sea. First look love, it the first time I even been said hello with other people. Her voice was very beautiful like a playing piano. This is the first time that my heart filled with love and happy. This Merry changes my life. After school..

“Hey, can I go home with you our house is near?”The Merry
“Sure!!” The boy
“Oh, thank you god to make her house near my house!!!”
“Should I come over to your house this evening so we could done our homework?”
“Sure come the door is always open for you!!”
“Okay, I’m heading this way goodbye!!”
“Good bye”